Saturday, October 30, 2010

Big Day Out

Our writing for our big day out was to record the day and remember it for ourselves and for our parents.

We all agreed that a great recount should...
  • be written in the order it happened
  • have a hook, so readers want to read it
  • have time words like; then, next, first, second, finally
  • be written like it has already happened (in the past)
  • have describing words
  • end with how we felt
Do you think we have included these things?

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